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Essay marks CSE2013

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  • 108 gdp gdh
  • Science and Tech - 138
  • S&T - 145
    Please please

    phir se please please

    Share how u have done such a miracle
  • Even I was surprised, bro (pleasantly, of course)
    Cannt say wat special I did.. May be d structure formantion did d trick..
    Explained fr dev. n then security.. Wat advnced coutries hve done n wat is done by India..
    Around 1800 wrds..
  • @himanjim @nt13 @vns1 @Terminator @Eddy @Aurelio @BlackBox @sarcinaxanthian @blackswordmaster
    plz share d basic structure and key points of your essay. if possible in detail plz.. wld benefit aspirants,.
  • gandhi 121 :)
  • @amritpalbhagat

    Honestly, I dnt remember wat exactly I wrote coz of intense pressure and not sure it will be any good to you, bt still if you insist I'll give it a try.

    I started some philosophical expressions regrding importnce of S&T in our daily lives today. Wat it was earlier n how far we have reached concluded with gowth is directly proportional to S&T.

    In the body, I divided it into growth and security. Growth includes various sectors like health, edu, stndrd of iving, economy, transport, space exploration, communication, food, water, nutrituion, sanitation, diseases, medicines, etc etc... Explained each one separatly with exmples of countries like US n European countries and wat India has done in all of them individually.

    { Did all this structuring at the background making it visible to the examiner }

    Then about defence n security, external, internal, traditional and non traditional. Examples like how countries like Britian ruled d world with its strong navy n advncemnt in S&T, how US is still so powerful bcoz of this. Cyber warfare n security threats to privacy. Space is also included here as it makes an importnt cmponent of security. India's space program n defence satllites were mentiined here.
    Finally, concluded with some philosophical expressions (again) to make it a strong point in the end.

    There were some othr points as well but I m sure I might hve missed them. I just made a point to make diffrnt paragraphs fr diffrnt topics/heads, use simple language, dont write more than 2 points in one page n keep it as crisp as possible.
    I believe the content n way of expression are equally importnt in an essay which comes with writing practice. Write as many essays as possible. Mine was just was plain n simple with no complexities.

    I dnt knw if it will be helpfull or not, anyways here is wat it is. Hope it helped. :) :)
  • @sarcinaxanthian
    You got awesome marks in this essay. Good job! My 2 questions:
    How long was this essay (approx words)
    Did you agree that S&T is panacea or did you give a balanced view?
    I know its a tough ask, but if you could rattle your brain a little more to point out what philosophical expressions you wrote to close the essay. When you say you made a strong point, did you agree that S&T is panacea?
    Thanks again for helping out!
  • @sarcinaxanthian Did you get through?
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